Yesterday I watched a story in the video.I watched penguin, man and small dog.The penguin is dangerous and thievish. The man is sleeping. The small dog is afraid, because the penguin is take a diamond.The cromit helped wallace.
I like the story because interesting for me.
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Dear Saeed,
Good work! I like the vocabulary you use to describe the penguin. There are a couple of changes to think about:
1. The penguin is take a diamond.
--Do you want simple present (-s) or present progressive (-ing)?
2. The Gromit helped Wallace.
--Don't use "the" for proper names.
3. ...because interesting for me.
--What is the subject?
--What is the verb?
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