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Wallace and Gromit live a house in England. One day Penguin lives together. Gromit doesn't like him and Gromit know his criminal!
He want diamond. So he used Wallace and trousers robot. but Gromit catched Penguin and Wallace and Gromit are so happy.
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I like the video because It's fun!
If you have many free time, So boring..... see a video.
You can feel time goes very fast!
1 comment:
Dear Siback,
Good work! I like how you retell the story. There are a couple of changes to think about:
1. One day Penguin lives together.
--Use the verb "move in to" for the first day.
One day Penguin moves in to Wallace's house.
2. Gromit know his criminal.
Do you want his or he's?
3. "Free time" cannot be plural, so you need to use "a lot of, some, or a little".
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