I see intelligent dog.He is cooking a breakfast,talk like a human and he read a newspapers.
The man he need a money.Penguin he rent a rooms.But the Penguin he was a wanted.Indeed Penguin
is need stael Diamond for in meseum.Gromit is angry new.The Gromit and Wallace are dodn't happen.
The Gromit and Wallace are catch for Penguin and he go to police.
I like bucues the Gromit he heaped frind and Wallace is happe new.
2 comments:
Dear Mohammed,
Good work! I like how you retell the story of the video. There are a couple of changes to think about:
1. The man he need money.
--Why do you have two subjects?
--Do you want simple present (-s)?
2. Indeed Penguin is need steal...
--Do you want simple present (-s) or present progressive (-ing)?
--Do you mean "need" or "want"?
3. In the second part, here are some spelling corrections:
--because
--helped
--happy
--now
Dear Nataly,
Thank you for help me
Have a nice day
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