Yastarday i watched the vdio in my class . The vdio was Wallace , cromit, and Penguin.
wallace is sleeping. Cromit is drinking. penguin warked at home. The penguin verey dangerous.
Because penguin wanted to take the diamond. The cromit helped wallace.
I like the vdio because verey intersting for my .
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Dear Ahmad,
Good work! I like how you retell the story in the video. Here are some changes to think about:
1. spelling: video
2. The video was about Wallace...
3. The penguin very dangerous.
--What is your verb?
4. The Gromit helped Wallace.
--Don't use "the" with proper names.
5. ...because very interesting for my.
--What is the subject?
--What is the verb?
--Use "me" after the verb or after a preposition.
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