First, Mr. Bean saw man. He ate sandwich. Mr.Bean seemed envy. So he made sandwich! after made sandwich, he saw man. He drank coffee. Second, Mr.Bean made coffee but he sneezed so dropped his sandwich. Finally man gave a another sandwich.
Good work! I like your explanation of the video. Be careful to write your sentences together in a pargraph. Right now, they are a list. Here are some changes for the next draft: --Topic Sentence: What is the main idea and controlling idea of the paragraph? --Envious is the adjective. Mr. Bean seemed envious. --Remember the punctuation for the transition words.
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Good work! I like your explanation of the video. Be careful to write your sentences together in a pargraph. Right now, they are a list. Here are some changes for the next draft:
--Topic Sentence: What is the main idea and controlling idea of the paragraph?
--Envious is the adjective.
Mr. Bean seemed envious.
--Remember the punctuation for the transition words.
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