First, Mr Bean was crazy man. He needed to cook a breakfast in garden.He wore coat of majec.Then they in his coat some butter,bread,lettuce,fish and pepper.I thought is mr Bean was crazy. Mr Bean sneezed and spoiled his breakfast.Finally, he neighbor gave him some sandwich.
1 comment:
Good work! You use the transition words well. Here are some changes for the next draft:
--Topic sentence: What is the main idea and controlling idea of the paragraph?
--Please double-check your spelling!
--After punctuation, put one space.
--Do you mean "there was" for "they"?
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