Thursday, June 30, 2011

Abu_saud

6/30/10 last years,My wife and I came to U.S.U .I was waiting in D.C.that day.Aftar that I went to Denver.

Denver was verey interesting.I lived in Denver for six months.Aftar that I went to Tucson.Tucson was verey nice.
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NR said...

Good work! Which city do you like better, Tucson or Denver?

Here are some changes:
--Don't begin a sentence with a numbered date. For example:

On June 30 last year,...

--Put one space after punctuation.

--Check your spelling in Microsoft Word!

July 2, 2011 at 10:46 AM

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