Thursday, June 30, 2011

Last year

Last year, l living from Riyadh.I was graduated Bachelor of Business Administration.I was eat with my famile or friends.I weak up morning.I was my car chevrolet.I visited Lebanon.

1 comment:

NR said...

Dear Mohammed,

Good work! Here are the comments finally.

Be more careful about the verbs. For example:
--I was living in Riyadh.
--I graduated with ...
--Use BE if the main verb is progressive.
--What is the past of wake up?
--I had a Chevrolet car.