Saturday, July 2, 2011
Last Year
Last year I had a good year because I was in high school with my friends. I was happy because my family was close to my and all my friends around me. I can easily visit my friends and my family. I love my family very much and I visit my family and my friends every weekend. Every month we go to the beach with my family. in march, I came to America and I am happy, because I need to study.
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Saeed,
Good work! It looks like you had a happy year. Here are some changes to make:
--close to me
--Make sure all the verbs are in the past tense.
--can (present)--> could (past)
--What is the past of "go"?
--Remember to put a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence!
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